Back by popular demand, Notes on Photography. A blog post about an actual image. I’m not entirely sure but I think this means I’m trending. We are looking at the Grand Canyon, a really, really, really big hole in Arizona. You’ve seen pictures I’m sure. This is the South Rim to be precise, in one of the numerous viewing areas humans gather to say “Damn, that’s a big hole, let me just get a bit closer…..aaaaaaaaaahhhhhh.” I’m joking but only a little because someone fell during my trip to the rim. And then a second person fell going after the first. Ya, it was bad, but I don’t want to dwell on that. I want to dwell on my obvious genius as a photographer. A lensman you might say. Gifted, touched or “blessed” in modern, IG nomenclature. I joke but let’s have a look at what worked.
1. Wait for it…foreground, midground and background. Peeps this is my game with anything under 50mm. Stack it up like pancakes. Layering builds depth, which we get here with rock in the foreground, humans in middle and layered Earth bringing up the rear.
2. Gesture. Her hand over her face makes the entire picture for me. Oh, and to answer the follow up question..I shot TWO frames total. The other is a horizontal and her arm is out and she is pointing at something. Her gesture is a moment. A REAL MOMENT. Not a posed moment. Not a perfected moment. Not a crafted image. Just real.
3. The white Nike swoosh on the black t-shirt in a strangely powerful contrast of natural beauty, one of the most significant, important places on Earth, but not outside the bounds of commercialism.
4. Film grain. This was made with Tmax 3200, my favorite black and white film of all time. Digital doesn’t give you this, nor can anyone simulate it that well. For those of you about to write me about a preset…save it. I’ve seen hundreds and some look pretty good but they don’t look like this.
5. Detail. This shot with blown sky never makes the edit pile. Nor would it if it required me to make two exposures, or conversions to sandwich together to hold detail. This frame has detail in the sky and in the blackest of black areas. Again, film does this very well.
6. History. This place is under threat, and in my lifetime will, chances are, see dramatic change. So, it’s nice to have this, and the rest of the take, in the archive.
Okay, what I didn’t like.
1. Light is a bit hot. Nothing I could do about it, but another 30 minutes later would have been better. I was base jumping naked thirty minutes later, otherwise…..
2. Her dog is lost. The fact there is a dog in front of the woman in the foreground is great, but the dog gets somewhat lost.
3. That foreground of white rock is a bit hot for my taste. I could and should have burned it down.
4. The sky does have detail, and there are clouds, which is great, but man would it have been better with lightning, late afternoon storm, spaceship, killer meteor or gaggle of translucent unicorns rumbling over the horizon. A guy can dream.
Now, is this a world beater image? No. Not really. But it fits nicely in a twenty picture package from this place. As we speak, one of the images I made during this trip is being mounted in a business office at a size of at least ten feet wide. It’s a sea of warm grain, natural beauty and history. Shoot it, edit it, save it and then find uses for it.
a moment? a real moment? why on earth would you want to photograph one of those? i love everything about this and these are the moments i try to seek out.
were you ever printing your own stuff or working with scans?
I’ve done everything. For YEARS I printed my own work and only gave up the darkroom after getting Lyme. Now I print digitally.
The Perfection lies in the Imperfection! Love the shot!
Thanks amigo. Out trying to make more.
Here’s a really interesting compositional Thingy that nobody ever seems to talk about. I got it out of Pictorial Effect in Photography (from the 1860s) and I am not sure I understand it right. But here goes. Breadth.
Basically, if you squint really hard and blur the whole thing out (ok, everyone knows that one, right?) you should end up with a “graceful sweep” of tone from quite dark to quite light. Maybe it’s dark at the bottom and sweeps upwards to light on top. Or light in the middle with a graceful sweep of grey to dark around the edges. Whatever.
So it’s the old business about “full range of tone” along with this “graceful sweep” idea.
Once you get it, you start realizing that virtually every single iconic image you know has. This one has it too! Yay! I see a dark horizontal band about 1/4 of the way up, sweeping out to white upwards, and somewhat more rapidly, downwards.
Also note that it’s a way to make a picture appealing, which ain’t always what you want.
Typical, I know next to nothing about this but now I’m walking around my house squinting at the images not he wall, almost none of which are mine. And yes……this actually works. How hammered was the person who figured this out? Thanks for sharing this. Will be great for students, and pros.
Dan- I really love these kinds of posts, very informative and it breaks down why a picture works. I would love seeing you do these kinds of post more often, like every other week or so.
That was the PLAN but if you saw my calendar you would pass out. Day before yesterday I was sleeping in my truck and all my clothes smell like a campfire. Now I’m home and packing again. I also love these posts, and wish I had something like this back when I was in school. I’m going to keep them coming but not sure I can hold to once a week. Thanks for commenting.
Wait, STOP, hold the press…you can take photos where there is detail…IN THE SKY?? Is it true? This will NEVER hold up on Instagram my friend 😉
Yes. It’s true. However, detail in the sky means you will lose at least 1/3 of your following. It may not be worth it.
Hey Dan – don’t know if you heard Kodak is bringing back TMax 3200. Maybe a reason for you to dust off the Leica and take it for a spin?
I noticed that. TMZ was my favorite film. I probably will take a run with it one day, but at this point I get so little time to shoot it would be wasted on me. Boohoo.